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Word count: 128392 | Since last entry: -24

The -24 words above is hilarious. I have been writing very head-down this week and have chopped off the entire last half chapter, replacing it with a new chapter-and-a-half. And this just HAPPENS to almost exactly equal the word count the last time I blogged. In point of fact I've removed almost 5000 words and written the same number of entirely new words. I hope to have a new complete draft ready to send to my beta readers today or tomorrow.

In the last week I also saw the excellent touring production of Twelve Angry Men, with Richard Thomas as Juror Eight, and have done a bit of decluttering. I've also been mildly sick. Not too surprising given the number of sick people at Potlatch.

The main reason I'm blogging right now is that I posted the following as a comment in [livejournal.com profile] kmckiernan's blog, and I thought it might be helpful to others.

For tracking story submissions I use an Excel spreadsheet with a separate sheet for each story. The name of each sheet is the story's filename (titles change, but I keep the same base filename for all versions) and it has the following columns:

  • Date Out
  • Sent To
  • Date Back
  • Days Out
  • Response
  • Comments
Each row represents a submission (well, technically a state change, because I also have rows for Wrote, Critiqued, and Edited for each story). The Days Out is automatically calculated from the Date Out and Date Back (or, if Date Back is blank, the current date). The Response field has the following values:
  • ? - Awaiting Response
  • R - Rejected
  • D - Withdrawn
  • X - Other Non-Sale (e.g. market closed)
  • W - Rewrite Requested
  • A - Accepted
  • P - Published
  • T - Trunked
I also have a Summary sheet with a macro that pulls together all of the rows in every sheet into a single sheet (adding the name of the sheet, which is the story identifier, as an additional column at the beginning). I use AutoFilter on this sheet to display only those rows where the status is Awaiting Response, and that's my summary of stories out and how long they've been wherever they are.

One important thing about my spreadsheet is that each sheet includes not only past submissions but future ones. The first few rows of each sheet have Wrote, Critiqued, and Edited in the Sent To field (with start and end dates and no Response value). The remaining rows are all markets, in the order in which I intend to send this story. I make up this list as soon as the story is finished. When I send the story out, I fill in the Date Out field. I use the Days Out field in my Summary sheet to see how long it's been out and to prompt me to query.

When I get a response, I fill in the Date Back and Response fields, and if the response is a rejection I just look down one row to see where I'm going to send it next. (If I already have a story at the next market, I move the next open market up a row and send it there instead.) This helps me to keep stories in submission. I rarely have a story sit around for more than a day or two. If the response is an acceptance, I remove the remaining markets and replace them with rows for Contract, Check, Galleys, and Publication for tracking the story through production.

Here's an actual example:

Date Out        Sent To                 Date Back       Days    Resp    Comments
16-May-06       [wrote]                 26-Jun-06       41              
22-Jul-06       [crit group]            05-Aug-06       14              
16-Aug-06       [revised]               17-Aug-06       1               
18-Aug-06       F&SF                    28-Sep-06       41      R       "Many thanks for sending [this] my way, but I'm going to 
                                                                        pass on this one.  As it happens, I just bought a 
                                                                        post-Katrina New Orleans ghost story."
28-Sep-06       Asimov's                16-Jan-07       110     R       "The story is quite sweet, but I'm afraid it 
                                                                        doesn't quite work for me."
16-Jan-07       Strange Horizons        27-Mar-07       70      R       "This has some moving and evocative moments, but the whole 
                                                                        thing with the ghosts feels too straightforward to me."
31-Mar-07       Realms of Fantasy       26-Sep-07       179     R       Queried after 6 months and got this back: "I emailed Shawna 
                                                                        about this one but never heard back.  I'm fairly certain 
                                                                        she passed on this one."
07-Oct-07       Glimmer Train           14-Dec-07       68      R       Marked as "Complete" (i.e. rejected) on their online status form
14-Dec-07       Weird Tales             06-Jan-08       23      R       "I'm not convinced it all worked for me, particularly the ending."
06-Jan-08       Brutarian                               68      ?       1/16/140
                Interzone
                Aeon
                Lady Churchill's
                Black Gate
                Talebones
The story is currently at Brutarian and has been for 68 days. The notation "1/16/140" is the minimum, average, and maximum response times for that market posted at the Black Hole market list. This helps me to know whether it's time to query.

The Comments field in the actual spreadsheet includes the entire response (usually I can just paste this in from the rejection email); I've included only a representative snippet above.

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Date: 2008-03-14 03:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] del-c.livejournal.com
That <pre> text block is quite broad, and breaks my friendslist. Any chance of using a smaller font, or less white space or mor line wrapping in the comments column?

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Date: 2008-03-16 06:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] georgekoliver.livejournal.com
Is this something you're thinking of making available as a template for others?

(and hello, you don't know me, but your writing journal has been very helpful to me :) )

Er, random request here....

Date: 2008-03-20 12:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] daedala.livejournal.com
Hiya. A mutual friend (lsanderson) directed me to this post -- I'm making a submissions database for a class, and have been asking writers I know to review the rules for it to see if I'm missing anything. It's kind of similar, in that it also has a place to track versions of a story, order of markets to submit to, and so on. A non-databasey friend said she found it very understandable.

Anyway, would you be willing to look at the rules? I'd be happy to give you a copy of the finished database, in Access (which I need for the class) or something open source (which I will do when the class is done so it runs natively on my Mac; I haven't decided on postgresql, msql, or mysql yet).

Gah, I feel like I'm asking you to do my homework. I hope it doesn't come across as quite that bad. :)

Re: Er, random request here....

Date: 2008-03-20 09:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nancymcc.livejournal.com
I want to stake a claim on first mutual friend connection! ;-)

Weeks ago, I asked david if he would be a reviewer, and told you, R, about the request and his inability to fulfill it due to time obligations.

Re: Er, random request here....

Date: 2008-03-20 09:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] daedala.livejournal.com
Oh. I'm sorry. I didn't remember it was the same person. This post was very recent. :(

Re: Er, random request here....

Date: 2008-03-20 10:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nancymcc.livejournal.com
Not a problem. Just my usual excessive precision... very important to keep the archive straight for when david is even more famous, doncha know!