9/15/05: Progress continues

About 675 words tonight on the space opera folklore story. That's most of the first real scene. Terribly old-fashioned, but the interleaved bits of future folklore will give it a postmodern twist. I'm sending it to Analog first, anyway.

I am concerned that the story's going to be too long... around 4000 words at this rate. I'd be happier if it were much shorter. Well, once it's done I can try to cut it.