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A very good day's writing, and I went to the gym and got a bunch of other chores done as well. We should ship a major release more often.

In the last couple of days I've written three and a half scenes that point out exactly how bad the situation has become. 1. Clarity has to deal with the human governments wanting to know what the hell is going on; 2. the Green Hills clan begins evacuating to orbit (and Clarity fears that they secretly control the orbital lasers and will take the plague back to the homeworld); 3. Clarity argues with the other Council members about whether a suicidal attack on the Green-Hills-controlled launch Platforms would be entirely futile or just mostly futile -- that last is the half-scene, because the argument is interrupted when 4. Raptor, chief of the Green Hills clan, calls to complain that Clarity has misinterpreted his actions (dodging all requests to explain his real motives) and to threaten serious reprisals for any attempt to recapture the Platforms.

And there's more violence, destruction, and betrayal to come before the chapter's out. Whee!

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Date: 2004-08-29 07:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crazysoph.livejournal.com
Just in case, I left a note for you here!! (http://www.livejournal.com/users/redbird/495176.html?thread=1416776#t1416776)

I am so pleased to see you here!

Crazy(that's me, behind the glass)Soph

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Date: 2004-08-29 11:32 am (UTC)

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