6/7/06: Briefly

[davidlevine]

Word count: 1946 | Since last entry: 328

Found another way to handle the opening. Now there's at least a hint of something weird within the first two pages. Will have to clean up the edges a bit tomorrow.

Also, I worked in the main character's name in paragraph 2. One of the perils of first person is that I managed to write over 1500 words without naming the narrator. Oops. Fixed now.

Comments

[davidlevine]

Uh... you're kidding, right?

[voidampersand.livejournal.com]

Yeah, although I do like that kind of story too.